Sunday, March 14, 2010

murmuring ...

tanka


lips here, there, there too
murmur becomes our safe word
i surrender it
my body watered by lust
longs for asphyxiation


mia

3/14

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26 comments:

  1. anthonynorthMarch 14, 2010 at 9:39 AM

    A powerful last line. Nicely done.

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  2. SandyCarlsonMarch 14, 2010 at 9:55 AM

    The safety of the murmur speaks to me.

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  3. SaraJMarch 14, 2010 at 10:07 AM

    we all do:)

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  4. robkistnerMarch 14, 2010 at 10:35 AM

    Enjoyed this considerably, very edgy…
    …rob
    Image & Verse

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  5. miaMarch 14, 2010 at 10:50 AM

    anthony..merci

    oui...sandy..the safety of the murmur

    sara...merci & oui

    mercimerci...rob

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  6. spiritsoflenaMarch 14, 2010 at 12:23 PM

    excellent! strong ending.

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  7. miaMarch 14, 2010 at 4:16 PM

    merci...SoL...

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  8. NadegeMarch 14, 2010 at 5:13 PM

    very erotic, missy.

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  9. Stan SkiMarch 14, 2010 at 6:10 PM

    Ah... le petit mort...

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  10. miaMarch 14, 2010 at 7:40 PM

    mercimerci ... Diva...

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  11. miaMarch 14, 2010 at 7:40 PM

    stan, merci.

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  12. Vinay Leo R.March 15, 2010 at 12:12 AM

    a very beautiful murmur, the last two lines esp. entice! :D
    good one Mia.. :)

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  13. miaMarch 15, 2010 at 3:01 AM

    merci, dear leo

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  14. MojoMarch 15, 2010 at 7:01 AM

    the power of a murmur, illustrated.

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  15. AmityMarch 15, 2010 at 3:23 PM

    Wow...beautifully painted...in simple words...and the word "asphyxiated" consummate all the murmurs!

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  16. miaMarch 15, 2010 at 3:50 PM

    merci mojo... O. i like that.

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  17. miaMarch 15, 2010 at 3:50 PM

    bon jour sweet amity...merci...you've
    said so much to me...merci.

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  18. Sherri B.March 15, 2010 at 4:59 PM

    Lush with passion...beautiful!

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  19. miaMarch 15, 2010 at 5:12 PM

    you are a bonbon dearest gale...merci.

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  20. Tammie LeeMarch 16, 2010 at 1:00 PM

    the title drew me in as did your poem.

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  21. miaMarch 16, 2010 at 7:59 PM

    merci, tammie lee...sweet of you to say.

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  22. Tumblewords:March 17, 2010 at 12:07 PM

    surely a descriptive poem!

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  23. miaMarch 18, 2010 at 5:05 PM

    merci...tumblehappy.

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  24. gabrielleMarch 20, 2010 at 6:03 PM

    to find the murmur in the murmur!

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  25. miaMarch 20, 2010 at 8:15 PM

    oui...how beautiful that is...merci gabrielle.

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  26. Cassiopeia RisesApril 18, 2010 at 2:08 PM

    Oh Mia this is wonderful. I just love your work.


    Melanie

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