She reminds me of myself. Very well written mia. I hope all is well at your end.
O! jal pari...exquisitely wonderful tohear from you again...all is a beautifuldream...merci.
Beautifully done, Mia.
great flow and mystic here
merci, sweet sandy...i was unable to leavea comment on your lovely poem at your place.
merci for the mystic, kay.
Oh, very bitter sweet, but really well done.
So very beautiful Well done.Melanie
Love the last three lines!
That distilled loneliness is bitter. This made me ache. Thank you.
Oooh, sad and lovely.
Evoked beautiful images, though it was meant to be sad, all I was left with was beauty and longing!
This poem is so dreamlike and also very vivid. Nicely written.
what a lovely aura...beautifully written Mia!
I enjoyed your poem. Thought, memories, and emotions distilled from a dream. The lingering image of someone's presence can be haunting.
as life is bittersweet...the bitter makesthe sweet sweeter...merci robin.
mercimerci cass rising...
melanie...a beautiful name...merci
a most excellent compliment to make oneache from a poem i've written...merci mojo
sister julia & the little one...ahhhh
aayushi...well...she is not all sad thereis always a beauty in fondled memories andlonging...merci
write girl you always have the nicestthings to say...merci
amity ...ever kind to me...merci
oOo...loch rob...yes a past lover's or anyperson heavy in your life...will alwaysremain with you...and in some instancesseem to haunt you...merci for reading thispoem with your heart
loneliness as a forgotten dream - great metaphor! peace, JP/deb
bon jour j/p...merci.