trippy headspace that kinda play.first and last couplet are strongest to me. like the double entendre suggested by ending, as being haunted.
O pearl...you are so right. i've been immersed in gertrude stein & e.e. cummings & plath,with my poetry circle and i'm all over theplace...merci for the critique pearl...
Shiveringinto flowering pointsof pain.Wow. Quietly powerful.
"she bloomsin all sorts of places"beautiful lines!!you're a wonderful writer!
mia, you shivered your petals sweetly, again.
Oooh!I love this delicate beauty...provocative and sensual.
Ooooh! to you sister julia...mercimerci...forloving this "delicate beauty"