Friday, March 12, 2010

addicted to the crush

crushed
to oblivion colours of nebula

shivering
into flowering points of pain

she blooms
in all sorts of places


mia

3/12


jolie prompt from lissa {unknowing}

http://thememoryofrain.blogspot.com/2010/03/distracted-oblivion.html?



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10 comments:

  1. PearlMarch 13, 2010 at 3:00 PM

    trippy headspace that kinda play.
    first and last couplet are strongest to me. like the double entendre suggested by ending, as being haunted.

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  2. miaMarch 13, 2010 at 5:29 PM

    O pearl...you are so right. i've been immersed in gertrude stein & e.e. cummings & plath,
    with my poetry circle and i'm all over the
    place...merci for the critique pearl...

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  3. CynthiaMarch 14, 2010 at 4:22 PM

    Shivering
    into flowering points
    of pain.

    Wow. Quietly powerful.

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  4. miaMarch 14, 2010 at 8:16 PM

    merci...pretty.

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  5. Aayushi MehtaMarch 15, 2010 at 11:42 AM

    "she blooms
    in all sorts of places"

    beautiful lines!!

    you're a wonderful writer!

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  6. miaMarch 15, 2010 at 5:10 PM

    oOo...aayushi...merci.

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  7. NadegeMarch 21, 2010 at 7:27 AM

    mia, you shivered your petals sweetly, again.

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  8. miaMarch 22, 2010 at 12:22 AM

    OoOoOoOooooo...mercimerci Nadege.

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  9. SisterJuliaMarch 23, 2010 at 10:53 AM

    Oooh!
    I love this delicate beauty...provocative and sensual.

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  10. miaMarch 24, 2010 at 4:21 PM

    Ooooh! to you sister julia...mercimerci...for
    loving this "delicate beauty"

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