Saturday, February 6, 2010

Phoenix - An Acrostic

Phasing out this life.
Hurting, forgotten fairy tale,
On a shadow's soul.
Everthing I knew, forgiven.
Never allow such memories,
Inside a hallowed heart.
Xanadu's trembling love prevails.


Mia
{february 6, 2010}

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6 comments:

  1. Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)February 7, 2010 at 2:35 AM

    Mia, this is a very good acrostic, until you get to the last line. I know you can "x" out somethings, but how you used it here takes away from this wonderful acrostic.

    I am glad to see you back, you have talent.

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  2. miaFebruary 7, 2010 at 3:34 AM

    i'll try to find another word. merci.

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  3. SarasFebruary 8, 2010 at 4:55 AM

    very good take on the prompt Mia!

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  4. miaFebruary 8, 2010 at 4:47 PM

    merci, saras so much

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  5. NadegeFebruary 14, 2010 at 1:46 AM

    mia, you've given spirituality
    to your acrostic -
    happy valentines' day shy one.

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  6. miaFebruary 14, 2010 at 4:08 PM

    oOo...
    merci dear Nadege...you as well... :]

    xoxoxoxo,
    mia

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