Sunday, February 7, 2010

single

one single desire
manifests
your lips to my flesh
and i become
your blank verse


mia
2.7

http://onesingleimpression.blogspot.com/

18 comments:

  1. Oooh That's gorgeous!
    Yum!

    I thought I'd let you know that your link on OSI doesn't work...I got here through your comment on my post. Glad I did! :)

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  2. oh! merci
    for letting me know
    i'll repair right-away.

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  3. Lips on flesh. How much better can it get. Such nice imagery.

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  4. "I become your blank verse"...that speaks volumes. Wonderful!

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  5. What a seductive and beautiful poem...I enjoyed my visit here.

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  6. sweet lips
    on sweeter flesh,
    loch rob.
    merci, m.

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  7. sweetest, becoming
    a blank verse
    can be liberating.
    merci, m.

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  8. happy, w. girl
    you enjoyed your
    visit...
    you look happy.
    merci, m.

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  9. i really liked this take! :)
    thanks a lot for responding to my theme! :D

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  10. merci dear leo...can't wait to think
    about your next theme.

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  11. Seductive, and it speaks a LOT!

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