Sunday, February 21, 2010

insomnia

the full moon pulls me as she pulls the ocean
sending tremors through my body

fractured memories become prayers
murmuring in my mind until a misty dawn

takes mercy upon me shoring me up
for tonight when again i become a silent spirit

dipped in uneasy holiness...


Mia
2/10


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22 comments:

  1. anthonynorthFebruary 22, 2010 at 12:35 AM

    A problem excellently described.

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  2. AmityFebruary 22, 2010 at 3:30 AM

    There is really that feeling...and that also frightens me...i feel like floating in space...ocean pulling me, i felt like am gonna die...

    you captured so well how it feels to be sleepless...

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  3. Snow WhiteFebruary 22, 2010 at 6:14 AM

    nice post :)loved it :)

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  4. KayFebruary 22, 2010 at 9:26 AM

    beautifully put.

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  5. SisterJuliaFebruary 22, 2010 at 11:57 AM

    Just wow!
    I love that prayer like state in the middle of the night
    Beautifully rendered.

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  6. Sherri B.February 22, 2010 at 12:31 PM

    That was beautiful...your words resonated.

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  7. SandyCarlsonFebruary 22, 2010 at 12:45 PM

    Very beautifully said. Thank you.

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  8. PearlFebruary 22, 2010 at 1:48 PM

    killer last line! woo. line 3 rocks too. strong material here.

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  9. miaFebruary 22, 2010 at 5:12 PM

    merci, anthony.

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  10. miaFebruary 22, 2010 at 5:14 PM

    oui...sometimes a bit of terror tries to seep
    in but that feeling must be halted with
    positive affirmations & sometimes i just get
    out of bed and read something light with
    a half a cup of tea or hot chocolate.
    a gentle hug for you amity.

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  11. miaFebruary 22, 2010 at 5:15 PM

    merci snow white

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  12. miaFebruary 22, 2010 at 5:15 PM

    kay...merci.

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  13. miaFebruary 22, 2010 at 5:16 PM

    sister julia...sometimes you can turn
    insomnia around & good deeper...merci.

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  14. miaFebruary 22, 2010 at 5:17 PM

    sweetest in the g. you are truly a bon bon.

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  15. miaFebruary 22, 2010 at 5:18 PM

    O...beautiful sandy, merci.

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  16. miaFebruary 22, 2010 at 5:20 PM

    pearl...oh & you are...merci...the last line
    was a gift from my muse...complete surprise.

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  17. geetaFebruary 22, 2010 at 8:16 PM

    fractured memories become prayers...
    awesome...loved this line

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  18. christineFebruary 23, 2010 at 2:44 PM

    Really so lovely. What images and sometimes I wonder if our sleeplessness has more to do with the moon and stars than what we realize.

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  19. Tumblewords:February 23, 2010 at 3:49 PM

    Well said!!

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  20. miaFebruary 23, 2010 at 4:07 PM

    & that's what truly happens...merci geetageeta.

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  21. miaFebruary 23, 2010 at 4:08 PM

    merci, tumblehappy.

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  22. miaFebruary 23, 2010 at 4:09 PM

    especially for women, christine...the moon
    does amazing things to our emotions and body,
    merci.

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