my submission
was tidy {to} the smallest
detail i became a rain drop
crystalized on a window's pane
until a pleasure occured...
and now here i am
half-broken where you left me
bound beneath the curtains
dripping...waiting for your return
so that i may enter the rain again...
mia
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interesting feelings you show as a raindrop wishing for release...and the underlying meanings too.
ReplyDeletemerci, lilibeth, merci for saying this
ReplyDeletepoem is interesting.
Sorry that you ended up in the spam filter. This was an interesting read, thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteTrapped in more ways than one.
ReplyDeletewondering what happened...oh well.
ReplyDeleteoui...
ReplyDeleteFull great interesting feelings here,thanks for sharing =]
ReplyDeletemarinela marinela .... merci.
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