Thursday, February 18, 2010

on becoming jean rhys for a fortnight

my submission
was tidy {to} the smallest

detail i became a rain drop
crystalized on a window's pane

until a pleasure occured...
and now here i am

half-broken where you left me
bound beneath the curtains

dripping...waiting for your return
so that i may enter the rain again...


mia
2.18

8 comments:

  1. interesting feelings you show as a raindrop wishing for release...and the underlying meanings too.

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  2. merci, lilibeth, merci for saying this
    poem is interesting.

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  3. Sorry that you ended up in the spam filter. This was an interesting read, thank you for sharing.

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  4. wondering what happened...oh well.

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  5. Full great interesting feelings here,thanks for sharing =]

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  6. marinela marinela .... merci.

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