Tuesday, August 18, 2009

the shy one

flesh
she yearns
to be touched
instead hot tears
rain softly upon her
breasts each night

filling her heart, pouring
into her soul where
love shoud be
fear controls her,
her heart
fades...


mia


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16 comments:

  1. KayAugust 18, 2009 at 8:34 AM

    oh, so sad, the ache for the arms of another...

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  2. RajAugust 18, 2009 at 8:47 AM

    very touchy.

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  3. CammilaAugust 18, 2009 at 12:37 PM

    Lovely words. :)

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  4. miaAugust 18, 2009 at 2:53 PM

    a longing only one may satisfy. merci, kay.

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  5. miaAugust 18, 2009 at 2:53 PM

    oOo, scarlet, pretty name, merci.

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  6. miaAugust 18, 2009 at 2:54 PM

    merci cammila, for visiting.,

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  7. Sweet SubmissiveAugust 20, 2009 at 7:48 PM

    wow, this one is deep. I love your poems. :)
    ss

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  8. miaAugust 21, 2009 at 8:28 AM

    bonjour sweet! so happy to have
    you comment. merci.

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  9. MothSmokeLoverAugust 22, 2009 at 10:44 PM

    I am in love with your poems :)

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  10. miaAugust 23, 2009 at 7:57 AM

    merci, sweetie-pie. a new poem is on her way.

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  11. UnknownAugust 24, 2009 at 1:08 AM

    Beautiful!

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  12. Americanising DesiAugust 24, 2009 at 10:46 AM

    sad but very true!

    and relateable!

    sigh!

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  13. miaAugust 24, 2009 at 4:40 PM

    merci merlin, appreciate your enthusiasm.

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  14. miaAugust 24, 2009 at 4:45 PM

    dear desi, i know you understand this poem.
    merci. luv your honest blog.

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  15. KayNovember 11, 2009 at 1:05 AM

    sentual and emotional...beautiful.

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  16. miaNovember 13, 2009 at 4:57 PM

    oh, oh merci kay. you're a love for
    giving me your time.

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